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Makes Sense Writing Strategies
Edwin Ellis & Theresa Farmer
OVERVIEW OF MAKES SENSE WRITING STRATEGY
Process writing involves three basic stages: pre-writing activities, writing production, and editing and revising.
Language Arts standards in most states require students to apply process writing skills to produce narrative,
descriptive, expository, and persuasive essays. The effectiveness of explicit instruction in process writing
strategies has been well documented through research.
Makes Sense Writing Strategies (MSWS) is a systematic, developmental, mastery -oriented approach to teach
students to use effective process writing strategies beginning at emerging literacy levels and continuing until
students can write well organized and articulated persuasive essays. In general, Language Arts teachers in
primary, intermediate, and middle schools use MSWS to supplement their writing programs. MSWS is also used by
remedial writing teachers in middle and high schools primarily to address the needs of students whose writing skills
have not developed sufficiently to enable them to pass state-wide writing assessments and/or graduation exams.
MSWS features three task-specific strategies and a series of graphic organizer “Frames,” developmentally
sequenced in sophistication so that teachers can scaffold instruction in their use. At the emerging literacy level,
students master use of very basic Frames. Initially, the focus is on classification organizational skills (e.g., words
related to a topic). Then students learn to use these words and compose sentences that are related to the same
topic. Once students have mastered these skills, they learn to apply very simple versions of the Frames to write
simple paragraphs (see Figures 1 & 2).
During the next phase of instruction, the Frames are enhanced via embedding semantic prompts specific to the
type of writing (narrative, descriptive) being produced (see Figure 3). As these skills are mastered, the semantic
prompts are faded, and students to apply the Frames to more complex topics (expository, persuasive) and to more
sophisticated Frames (see Figures 3 & 4). Throughout the process, teachers and stud`ents use a series of rubrics
that are also scaffolded in complexity to match students’ developing process writing skills.

STUDY 1:
The Effects of Makes Sense Writing Strategies on High-stakes Writing Assessments in
Elementary Schools with Varying Histories of Prior Performance
This study examined the impact of MSWS instruction on schools with various histories of prior performance
on a state-wide writing assessment designed to measure students’ process writing skills.
Teachers in 26 elementary schools with varying histories of prior performance on the state high-stakes
writing assessment were provided MSWS instructional resources and professional development in how to
differentiate process writing instruction to make it developmentally appropriate in diverse-ability classrooms.
The data depicted in Table 1 reflect the mean percentage of students in each category that met or
exceeded standards on a state writing assessment before and after implementing MSWS. The data show
that mean scores in each category of schools dramatically increased. The data also suggest that schools
with histories of poor performance on the state writing assessment made the most marked gains, whereas
schools with prior histories of good performance made the most modest gains.

Although this study did not employ a control group (school), state-wide mean performance during the same
period reflected .05 percentage point gain
STUDY 2:
The Effects of a Makes Sense Writing Strategies on 5th Grade High-stakes Writing Assessment
Performance in Two Rural Elementary Schools
This study examined the impact of MSWS instruction on 5th grade student performance in rural elementary
schools relative to state-wide performance on a high-stakes writing assessment. These assessments are
administered annually to all students in 5th grade with the exception of those with severe cognitive
disabilities. The assessment is designed to evaluate students’ ability to write coherent, organized narrative,
descriptive, and expository essays and apply conventions of print correctly.
A multiple-baseline research design was employed to evaluate the effectiveness of MSWS. The research
procedures require that baseline performance of a school be established and either is stable (not changing)
or declining. In other words, it must be demonstrated that the school is not improving its performance prior
to introducing the experimental intervention (MSWS). Once a stable baseline is established, the intervention
is implemented, and then performance is assessed to determine its impact. A second school serves as a
form of control group. Thus, the experimental intervention is not introduced until after the first school
demonstrates increased performance.
Before implementation of MSWS instruction, performance of Elementary School A was tracked for Year 1
and 2 to establish baseline scores. Data in Table 2 reflect the percentage of 5th grade students that met or
exceeded the state writing standards. School A’s performance decreased following Year 2 of the baseline
period. During Year 3, School A was provided MSWS instructional materials and professional development
in their application. Table 2 shows that performance in the state-wide writing assessment increased from
28.08% of the students to 51.43%.following Year 3, and then increased again to 81% following Year 4.

Baseline performance during Year 2 and 3 of School B shows that this school’s performance decreased
from 22% to 10%. In Year 3 while School A, which was now implementing MSWS increased significantly.
MSWS instructional resources and professional development was then provided to School B during Year 4.
Subsequent performance on the high-stakes writing assessment of School B increased from 10% to
62.24% following Year 4, and increased again to 71% following Year 5.
Results of this study support validation of MSWS as a writing intervention that may dramatically improve 5th
grade student performance on high-stakes writing assessments.
STUDY 3:
The Effects of Makes Sense Writing Strategies on 10th Grade High-stakes Writing Assessment
Performance in Two Semi-rural High Schools
This study examined the impact of MSWS instruction on 10th grade student performance in semi-rural high
schools relative to state-wide performance on a high-stakes writing assessment. These assessments are
administered annually to all students in 10th grade with the exception of those with severe cognitive
disabilities. The assessment is designed to evaluate students’ ability to write coherent, organized narrative,
descriptive, expository, and persuasive essays and apply conventions of print correctly.
This study employed a pre-test / post-test with control group design. Two high schools with similar prior
histories of performance were used in the study. Table 3 shows that in both schools, 51% the 10th grade
students met or exceeded state standards. Students in the “control group” high school received traditional
10th grade English class writing instruction. Post-test scores indicated that 53% of its 10th grade students
met or exceeded state standards.

Students in the “experiment al group” high school received MSWS. Post-test scores indicated that 77% of its
10th grade students met or exceeded state standards during the same time period. Results of this study
support validation of MSWS as a writing intervention that may dramatically improve 10th grade student
performance on high-stakes writing assessments.
Results of this study support validation of MSWS as a writing intervention that may dramatically improve
10th grade student performance on high-stakes writing assessments.
STUDY 4:
Effects of Makes Sense Writing Strategies on Rural and Suburban 7th grade performance in Highstates
Writing Assessment
This study compared the impact of MSWS instruction on 7th grade rural and suburban student performance
on a state-wide writing assessment. A rural middle school and a suburban middle school were matched
based on the percentage of 7th students in each school that met or exceeded state writing standards for 7th
grade on the most recent state assessment. Thus, the performance of both schools was similar prior to
implementing MSWS.

MSWS instructional resources and professional development was provided to Language Arts faculty in both
schools. Data in Table 4 show that both schools made dramatic and very similar gains in the percentage of
students who met or exceeded state writing standards after the schools implemented MSWS.
Results of this study support validation of MSWS as a writing intervention that may dramatically improve
rural and suburban 7th grade student performance on high-stakes writing assessments.
STUDY 5:
Effects of Makes Sense Writing Strategies on 7th Grade African-American and Students with
Disabilities’ Performance on High-stakes Writing Assessment
This study used a pre-test / post-test with control group design. Pre-test performance of 7th grade students
in three middle schools was matched so that all were performing similarly prior to implementation of MSWS
in one of the schools. Thus, two schools served as comparison, “control” groups and one school was used
as the “experimental” group.
Table 5 shows that School A, B, & C were performing on the state-wide writing assessment at similar levels.
The aggregated data depict the percentage of 7th grade students in each of the respective schools who met
or exceeded state writing standards for 7th grade.
Language Arts teachers in School C received MSWS instructional resources and professional development.
Post-test performance shows that while the performance in Schools A and B declined, School C made
significant improvements during the same time period as evidenced by a 22.86 percentage point gain from
the previous year.

Table 6 provides the pre-test / post-test performance of students who are African American in the three
schools. These de-aggregated data show that the gains (20.75 percentage point gain) made by students
who are African American and received MSWS instruction were similar to that of the general population of
7th grade students receiving MSWS.

Table 7 provides the pre-test / post-test performance of students with disabilities (with the exception of
those with severe cognitive disabilities) in the three schools. These de-aggregated data show that the
percentage of students with disabilities who received MSWS instruction who met or exceeded the state
writing standards for 7th grade increased where those with disabilities in the schools that did not implement
MSWS decreased during the same time period. These data also show that while students with disabilities
who received MSWS instruction made gains, they were not proportional to the gains made by the general
population of 7th grade students. In this study, data was not further de-aggregated so that performance of
different disability groups could be analyzed.

Results of this study support validation of MSWS as a writing intervention that may dramatically improve 7th
grade student performance, including students who are African American on high-stakes writing
assessments. The data indicate that performance of students with disabilities, as an over-all group, can also
be improved using MSWS.
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